Pasturn's Reviews

[Run Bunnies]

Good Idea

Good idea, but the jump control takes awhile to get use to. I like the fact that you can customize bunny color and name though. Also, once you upgrade a bunny, it looses it's ability to jump -- which is really annoying, because then they get stuck and die. I want to keep my bunnies.

[D-Boy VS. Nny]

Very Nice.

Rarely have I heard or seen anyone who can capture the darker aspects of this comic in such a light. It has a very industrial edge to it, kind of reminds me of Skinny Puppy in some ways. The 9/10 is because as much as I enjoy it, it still feels like it's missing something. I'm not sure what. But I look forward to hearing your other works. Good job!

soulmasking responds:

Thank you, I appreciate your review. I have to say this is definitely one of my favorite songs I have created. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks.

[Asilo Art Productions Logo]

Actually...

LordKernkraft kind of had a point. He could have said it nicer, though. I'm not saying I'm any better, but the breasts do look a little off. After looking at this awhile I realize it's mostly just the way the fabric falls ON her breasts -- generally a close-collared shirt isn't going to have that much heavily detailed cleavage. I recommend looking up some fabric and clothing tutorials. You also could have shaded her hair, but for 10 minutes I'd say this is good. Other then that though I like the smooth coloring and the design for her face paint.

JokerKitty responds:

The shirt she's wearing is actually based off of a cheap kmart shirt I have in my posession, so I knew it wouldn't show much, but I really wanted to emphasize the cartoony breasts, so I went with a non-realistic way of material drapage anyway. TV produced cartoons and how-to-draw books get away with it, so I can I ;P but thanks for the critique! Tis very appreciated

[Mysterion]

Nice!

Fuck yes, Mysterion. I love that arc in the series. It put a lot of depth to Kenny's character. As far as your picture goes, pretty good too! I absolutely adore your background and the sort of comic-y style you drew it in. Only thing I can think of to critique is his positioning. Something about it seems a bit...off. I feel like his body should be angled more to the left. But still, not a bad rendering at all.

[Mewtwo]

Awesome.

I'm a little bias on this picture since Mewtwo is my favorite Pokemon, and you rendered him rather well, but I'll throw in some critique anyway since most artists like that.

His pose is quite powerful even if it's only a facial shot, and the colors are very eye fetching. I also like the sharp curves of his skull, and his eyes are especially nice. However I think the picture would be more effective if the highlights on his skin and the lineart were blended in a bit more and not so sharp. Other then that, nice.

Diives responds:

Yeah, you're right, maybe the lineart was to much separte from him, and if I mix a little more the painting and the lineart, it would have so much impact on the people.

Thanks for your artist rewrite! I will consider for the next one :D

And Mewtwo is one of my favorite pokemon too :D he's soo AWESOME x3